The prompt was ….I’m exhausted. Shut the door behind you….
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It’s 3:15 my
poppets. Home time! Got everything? Good.
Jason, you’re
back. What do you need? Your reading book is in the yellow box. Yes, good night.
Ryan? No, your
lunchbox was left in the playground. Try
looking in lost property. Yes, off you go.
Mrs Newson. She’s come out with nits? She came in with nits Mrs Newson, and now we
all have them. Off you go.
Antonia. Now what?
You can’t find your Moshi Monster. Why
was it even in school? No, toys are not
show and tell. Look in the morning. Off you go!
I am
exhausted. Shut the door behind you…
Yes, headteacher?
8 comments:
Just brilliant! I love how the dialogue tells the whole story. It reminds me of Joyce Grenfell actually, and made me laugh just like she does :D
This really made me smile, particularly the line about 'nits'. A really good take on the prompt and I enjoyed it. Well done.
Love it - so true to life!
Ooh, you've just described me perfectly!!
Ha ha, this could be one of my days :-)
That is exactly what goes on at the end of the schoolday! I know from personal experience! You captured it in 100 words.
Brilliant! I could hear Joyce Grenville!
Totally convincing, I can picture it all!
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